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A few days ago [livejournal.com profile] mizkit posted how she'd once obsessed about having a hero and heroine whose last names both began with "K".

I have so totally got her beat. This book is all "Z"'s, all the time, with Zuberi, Nizam and Zorion, not lead characters but all three are significant--two of them are viewpoint characters. And, of course, it's too late to change since all three were inherited from the first book in this series.

Not to mention I used the name Prokopios twice by accident--once for a character in the funeral scene and later as the person voted Most Likely To Be Assassinated. At least that one's an easy fix.

But other than the minor annoyances, the revisions are proceeding. One trick I've learned over the years is to create a scene list as I'm writing the book. It's a separate file that lists each chapter and has one or two sentences for each scene. A typical entry is:

Chapter 7
Lady Ysobel's POV--meets with Captain Zorion before he sets sail, summoned by council to discuss news from Ikaria.


The scene list serves as a master index for revisions, so rather than skimming through the entire manuscript, I can jump right to where I need to be. And, given that this book has two separate story lines, the scene list is a quick visual guide showing how I'm balancing the two, and whether I need to rejuggle before the reader forgets what's happening on the other side of the ocean.

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Date: 2007-03-04 06:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kristine-smith.livejournal.com
Every time I ponder this, I think how Bujold wrote a series where the surname of just about every pivotal character began with Vor-.

I wonder if she ever regretted it?

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Date: 2007-03-04 06:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kristine-smith.livejournal.com
I like your idea of the scene outline, btw, which is something I could probably do with Scrivener.

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Date: 2007-03-04 06:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] melissajm.livejournal.com
Fortunatly, most of the main characters are referred to by their first names,

My WIP has two characters with the same name. On purpose. I must be nuts.

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Date: 2007-03-05 12:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pbray.livejournal.com
After a while I just ignored the Vor as null characters and focused on the rest of the name :-) Though it did give it a bit of a Russian novel feeling.

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Date: 2007-03-05 02:38 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] larryhammer
Oo -- I like that scene-index idea. Dunno how well it'd work for me before I start breaking the draft into chapters, though.

---L.

Don't sweat the small stuff

Date: 2007-03-06 03:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] elizabeth-welsh.livejournal.com
My writing status is still amateur, and so this advice may be worth exactly what you paid for it. Still, I don't think the coincidence of a bunch of monograms in common is that worrisome. Let's take a look at real life for a moment: My husband's best friend is Gary. My husband's supervisor is also named Gary. My husband's teacher is Gary. Half the time when he's telling me something funny that "Gary" said, I've no idea which one. And yet, books rarely have characters with the same name even though it happens all the time.

Want a better example. I go by the name Beth. In college I was in a swing choir called General Delivery, which was a small group between 15-20 singers each year. My first day I was assigned to the alto section next to another brunette girl whose name happened to be Beth. Our director glanced up and said, "So we'll call you Beth Ann and you Beth," while only sort of nodding in our general direction, but we were sitting right next to each other. I had no idea how he'd known my middle name, but figuring that I was the newby and she wasn't, I imagined I'd be the one using the longer name. So when he said, "Beth Ann, sing that section," both of us stood up and sang. And the worst part? Both our last names began with T at that time.

I figure if it happens in real life, you shouldn't sweat it in your stories. But if it really bothers you, you can work it into the story somehow. Coincidences can be advantageous. Since people are often assigned to things alphabetically, your characters might have a reason to interact when they might not have otherwise.

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